Tonington - that was a rough read - I had never seen it before but I had chills getting through it...
I was reminded of watching film of the landings at Normandie where the barges unloaded their precious cargo - many of whom drowned under the weight of their gear they were carrying as soon as they hit the water.... many others who followed walked on their backs to reach the shoreline...some were part of the landing on the beaches - in death.
Yes it is quite rough on the edges, as I'm sure those trenches must have been. Owen was a teacher before the war, he served in the trenches and was caught in a explosion, diagnosed with shellshock and sent home in 1917, a year later he was back in France, two months later he was awarded the Military Cross, and one month after that he was killed by German machine gun fire.