Poetry as an Art Form

TomG

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If some of the archaic language and amateur poet comments are about my posts, I was trying to build an idea rather than write poetry. The archaic language with minor changes comes from one of the better known speeches in Shakespeare’s Julius Caesar. I agonized a bit about whether to cite it or not and decided not to, at least immediately. Using Shakespeare’s speech with slight modification is important to the idea.

It is a rough draft of an idea, maybe an idea in progress, but the idea is intended to say something about the role of poetry as an art form in modern western culture. The subsequent material from Celtic mythology and Robert Burton are further to the idea. For better or worse, it was the idea not the poetry I worked at. Lord, and to think I might have gotten into the roles of Plato vs. Aristotle in our modern culture. Oh well, I’m an amateur to those subjects as well and happily so.
 

darkbeaver

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Apres Bush

by J.A. Miller / November 8th, 2008
The most delicate organ in the [American] body is the pocketbook.
– Mark Twain Fists of a million plus undead
Corpses pale completely bled
Ghostly fingers at our door
Rapping, tapping… evermore
Iraqi bodies heaped so high
Palestinian dead in good supply
Shot or tortured, bombed or hung
Droned to death, sniped while young
Afghans J-DAM’d at a wedding
Somalis blasted as if shredding
The Lebanese? They’re cluster-bombed
White Man’s death comes with aplomb
His high tech tools efficiently
Murder extra-judicially
No need for trial by your peers
The Magna Carta disappear’d
Black and brown, the starved and poor
Consigned to death, the Western cure
For non Judeo-Christians all
Dare they resist, dare they not crawl
But hark!
Cold legions with insistent knock
The payment’s due, our fear they mock
What do they want? What have we wrought?
Dead hands outstretched, they can’t be stopped
They’ve risen from the Stygian deep
Icy from uneasy sleep
To meet, confer and set their price
They’ll now assign our cost precise
“Take now their souls!” Up goes the cry
“We’ll suck them out and leave them dry
The dearest jewel of humankind
Empty husks with death entwined”
But comes a young girl’s voice like thunder
Bloodied brow, limbs torn asunder
Rising from Jenin’s high rubble
“Forget their souls, let’s cause real trouble!
“Long has the White Man left behind
Care for his soul, it’s been consigned
To ninth or tenth place of concern
Their love of money is what burns
“Into their hearts, into their brains
Money masks their psychic pain
In comfort, excess, life of ease
Their goal’s to do just as they please
“‘Freedom of choice!’ Their battle cry
Toothpaste, cars or weaponry
(But when they did send Death to call
No choice had we, so we did fall)”
Thus sayeth our Jenin miss
“Let’s skip the dread dementor kiss
Instead we’ll take what they love most
T’is property of which they boast
“Not kindness, love or character
To gold, to things they do defer
Their bloody sacred ‘way of life’
We’ll strip it down, loose on them strife
“Their mortgages and IRAs
Pensions, shares, do not delay
Demolish all of them forthwith
De-capitalize and make it swift
“As recompense for all we’ve born
It seemeth paltry, a mere thorn
Stuck in their bloated, moneyed flesh
They’ll writhe a bit, flail and thrash
“But financial chaos is much more
It heralds what can’t be ignored
Their empire’s dying by degrees
The time has come, we won’t appease!”
The bill’s now due to those who’ve gone
On before us, they’ve been blown
Away by us, they had no choice
In our distress they now find voice
Exposed are we, fault lines laid bare
Our house of cards? Beyond repair
Humbled, cheated we must bow
Recompense forced duty now
It is but little, it is but late
Greed supreme has cast our fate
Drugged by siren song of wealth
We all wreaked mayhem, blood and death
Moreover…
To those amongst us those who assumed
Progressive mantles, we presumed
‘Cause we protested, whispered “no”
We did our part, our quid pro quo
A special place in this new hell
Reserved for those who did “rebel”
In sheep-like demos with non-violence
Producing only deep dark silence
Our silence was so deafening
We could not change a single thing
Childish marches tightly muffled
In cowardice we bowed, we shuffled
In the end our principles
Were worthless really, utter bull
Wealth purchased our true loyalty
And here we are still on our knees
And finally…
The blowback is a-blowing back
It’s creeping inward on a track
To devour its own with rank abandon
No mercy – none – and it’s begun
For those who sent forth Death abounding
Made Death – like interest – compounding
Have turned their gaze to a fresh view
And now they’re coming after you