Lullaby I Wrote

[Hoof Hearted]

So I already posted a version of this Lullaby I wrote called 'Go to Sleep' on this website.

I recently recorded a new version of the ballad with an updated bridge.

My guitar is a little sketchy and the vocals are a bit juiced, but I'd like your opinions on this track just the same.

The birth of my daughters inspired me to pen this song.


Thanks,

Pat

 

[spaminator]

 

[Decapoda]

So I already posted a version of this Lullaby I wrote called 'Go to Sleep' on this website.

I recently recorded a new version of the ballad with an updated bridge.

My guitar is a little sketchy and the vocals are a bit juiced, but I'd like your opinions on this track just the same.

The birth of my daughters inspired me to pen this song.

https://soundcloud.com/user-220106867%2Fpat
Thanks,

Pat

I nodded off. Good job!

 

[Hoof Hearted]

Hah!

My elderly Mom said the same thing..."Oh my, this song is making me very sleepy." lol!

I'm in the circles of musicians, so I'll try to get a keyboard arrangement to back up the tune and then I'll repost the new track on this thread.

 

[Ron in Regina]

So I already posted a version of this Lullaby I wrote called 'Go to Sleep' on this website.

I recently recorded a new version of the ballad with an updated bridge.

My guitar is a little sketchy and the vocals are a bit juiced, but I'd like your opinions on this track just the same.

The birth of my daughters inspired me to pen this song.


Thanks,

Pat

Very Cool Man!!!

 

[Hoof Hearted]

Well...I got a real 'hoot' out of this one for sure.

I sent my Lullaby to an outfit in Nashville called SongWritersMusicGroup.

This was their critique of my tune...

"We think your song has “Hit” song potential and we feel a lot of people
will be able to relate to this song if properly presented. You should
not “pitch” your recording to music industry professionals. It is too
slow, needs a music break and the chorus repeated. Your recording also
sounds dated, like something from the 1960's.

But then they go on to offer me a recording contract. If I send them $795.00, a group of professional vocalists and musicians will redo my song.

What do you make of all of this? Is it a scam? Your thoughts?

I figure right out of the gate, if they really liked my song they'd offer to buy it off of me. My Spidey senses are tingling on this one.