my haiku

tell me what you think. I wrote these for my girlfriend.

Let it rain.
You are like a summer storm.
When warm kisses fall like raindrops.
They are soft and gentle.

Greater then words
No words are ever enough.
To tell you how I feel inside.
I feel more then love.

Ten Packs
"Modern Haiku.
The history of the modern haiku dates from Masaoka Shiki's reform, begun in 1892, which established haiku as a new independent poetic form. Shiki's reform did not change two traditional elements of haiku: the division of 17 syllables into three groups of 5, 7, and 5 syllables and the inclusion of a seasonal theme."
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