today in english the teacher made us right a page story in 5 minutes it had to have a narraitor and around 2 people having a conversation(dialogue)...just to skip ahead it was really funny to everyone and it even made the teacher laugh...
here it is(and if there are any gammer errors ignore them...)and("(space)yadayada" means the other person talking)
As Sam walked down Shanty street he noticed a shadow under a street light, as he got closer he realized it was his good buddy Ned.As soon as Sam got close he immediatly said"Tuesday is coming did u bring your coat? Ned replied "I live in a giant bucket!"..." well you get an F in effiencey, but an A+ in dramatic timing!" Ned, angered, he punched Sam in the face,and at that time a 10 year-old boy ran by and yelled "owned!,I saw it!,you just got owned!" At that moment Sam climbed up a near-by ladder onto a roof and screamed "I'll do it!" " Sam! NO!" And while Sam was thinking "did I leave the oven on?" He lost his balance and fell 60feet to his death. As Ned fell to his knees and screamed "WHY! WHY! why! did i eat that casserol for dinner!" realizing "hey it's 8:00pm and survivor is starting". As Ned skipped down the street, a 6ton dumpster truck lost control and hit Ned then crashed into a gas station which triggered a series of explosions destroying the town of Idiotville.
The End!
lol my the end of this everyone was laughing so hard about 4 of them started to cry-laugh! lol
and dont just read it! tell me what you think, I like to see...read what other people have to say
here it is(and if there are any gammer errors ignore them...)and("(space)yadayada" means the other person talking)
As Sam walked down Shanty street he noticed a shadow under a street light, as he got closer he realized it was his good buddy Ned.As soon as Sam got close he immediatly said"Tuesday is coming did u bring your coat? Ned replied "I live in a giant bucket!"..." well you get an F in effiencey, but an A+ in dramatic timing!" Ned, angered, he punched Sam in the face,and at that time a 10 year-old boy ran by and yelled "owned!,I saw it!,you just got owned!" At that moment Sam climbed up a near-by ladder onto a roof and screamed "I'll do it!" " Sam! NO!" And while Sam was thinking "did I leave the oven on?" He lost his balance and fell 60feet to his death. As Ned fell to his knees and screamed "WHY! WHY! why! did i eat that casserol for dinner!" realizing "hey it's 8:00pm and survivor is starting". As Ned skipped down the street, a 6ton dumpster truck lost control and hit Ned then crashed into a gas station which triggered a series of explosions destroying the town of Idiotville.
The End!
lol my the end of this everyone was laughing so hard about 4 of them started to cry-laugh! lol
and dont just read it! tell me what you think, I like to see...read what other people have to say
